First Steps Part 2
Boy, Howdy, I had no idea how exciting posting and getting feedback would be! Thank you so much! Your kind words really helped calm my nerves, but now I feel guilty for the times I've read and lurked...
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arrggghh.....more!!! please??!!! I am really enjoying your story. Thanks for sharing it.Cen
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Great story. I loved Heath's comment about Nick being a grizzly bear protecting his territory.
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I love your writing, thank you for sharing this story with us and please with more.
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I'm absolutely love this fic! Please post ASAP! Remember, Heath felt something hit his back! The boys don't yet realize how badly Heath is injured, so please have that tidbit come to light (like right...
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Nice bit of brotherly interaction. All very true to form and character. Really kind of heart wrenching the way Heath clearly feels like he's on the outside looking in. I'll be waiting for more...Nora
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This is fantastic. Please don't let the brothers ride off before they realize that Heath is really hurt. ASAP.
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Oh man, poor Heath! I think he's hurt worse than Jarrod and Nick think...was that sting in his bakc a bullet?! I hope they break down and care for him...after all, he probably saved Gene's life!Keep...
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You picked up the pace nicely...I loved that you opened with 'sound'. That's so very true, that he'd hear the widow weeping first. I loved that Victoria thought ahead to pack bandages in Nick's...
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Excellent post...I really felt as though I were there beside them all, you painted the scene so clearly, easily relaying Heath's emotions and feelings!! Now what are they to do? Ignore Heath, hope he...
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Why should I be concerned? he pondered. Am I my brothers keeper? The idea stopped him in his tracks. He turned, giving the boy another glance. Heath was still staring at Eugene and Nick, that damned...
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Exactly what Deirdre said! I am loving this interpretation of POG! It is highly original and when I think how many times this episode has been tackled that is no mean feat. This is truly excellent,...
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I think because Heath protected Gene, Jarrod will take him back to the ranch. From there, anything can happen! chapter and
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Like the others...I truly enjoyed Chapter 2.What great insight you gave to Heath's longing to be part of something bigger...a part of caring and concern of brothers.Loved all the word pictures. I am a...
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I was mesmerized by your ability to write this scene in such an intelligent, articulate, and original way. Wonderful! Looking forward to more!
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Not much left for me to say, austen, but you've done a masterful job of this chapter! How can the Barkleys just observe the obviously injured Heath from a distance and then casually ride away, leaving...
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Why should I be concerned? he pondered. Am I my brothers keeper?Of course you are your brother's keeper!! We love that about you! This writing is fantastic. You have added a bright new talent to the...
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Outstanding story. Just had to add my accolades to all the others. I hope there'll be another chapter soon. I like this "after the battle" story much better than what was shown in the original episode.
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Just a note to let you know how much I am enjoying your story. Keep up the wonderful writing! I look forward to more.
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